SIREN SISTERS by Dana Langer
published by Aladdin, January 2017
suggested age range: 9 – 13
A soon-to-be siren finds herself responsible for the lives of her sisters–and the fisherman they curse–in this haunting debut novel.
Lolly Salt has three beautiful sisters. When they’re not in school or running their small town’s diner, they’re secretly luring ships to their doom from the cliffs of Starbridge Cove, Maine. With alluring voices that twelve-year-old Lolly has yet to grow into, the Salt sisters do the work mandated by the Sea Witch, a glamorously frightening figure determined to keep the girls under her control. With their mother dead after a mysterious car accident, and their father drowning in grief, the sisters carry on with their lives and duties until a local sea captain gets suspicious about the shipwrecks.
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IMPORTANT TOPICS AND THEMES:
Death of a parent, grief, the environment, making choices
So what did we think?
Meagan: I almost gave up on this book because I was reading too many things at once, and I wasn’t totally hooked by the first two chapters. I’m SO glad I stuck with it though. Around chapter three it really turned a corner, and I loved it after that. In fact, I texted you as soon as I finished it and told you it was a MUST READ.
Eva: I felt the opposite — I was drawn in almost immediately! Maybe because I loved the setting: a quaint and quirky New England sea town that holds an annual folk festival and is seeped in the legends and history of its colonial days. In some ways Starbridge Cove felt like a real, specific place, and yet it in other ways the town had a mystical quality that made the sea witch and the existence of sirens seem believable.
Meagan: Let’s talk about the sea witch! She is first introduced in chapter three. Prior to her introduction, we’ve only been told that Lolly is becoming a siren and her sisters are sirens but none of that felt tangible to me until the witch came on the scene. From that point on, the whole story was a rich and complicated tapestry with threads coming together from hundreds of years of the town’s history, cultures from all over the world, and the interplay and of many complex characters. I often find myself drawn to complex stories, and this definitely fit the bill.
Eva: Yes, one of my favorite things was how the town’s history and the ancestors of some of the characters played into the story. (There’s an old diary, for example, that I couldn’t get enough of.) I, too, loved the complexity of the sea witch — she was a great character who winds up being both an enemy and a friend.
She also has some of the best lines in the book:
She narrows her eyes. “Young man, ‘witch’ is in the eye of the beholder. It’s just a name… Let’s not talk of witches and thieves and try to figure out who is or isn’t crazy. That’s nearly always a waste of time.”
Meagan: I wonder about Dana Langer’s earlier drafts. The story and characters were so complicated, I imagine this book could easily have been twice as long. I’m curious if her first draft was enormous and then she edited it down a lot. For so many characters and subplots we get just the tiniest taste of what’s going on and the rest is left to the imagination of the reader. I don’t find this to be very common, but I really thought it worked. It was like the opposite of over-writing. I guess that’s called “trusting your reader.”
Eva: I agree. I thought she did a great job with pacing. I wasn’t always 100% on board with some of her plotting choices (for example it’s a little too easy for Lolly to get the info she needs from the sea witch), but from the middle of the book on the stakes were high and the tension was mounting.
Meagan: For such a multi-faceted story, it managed to move along pretty quickly. Near the end, as the pace picked up, I found myself noticing these truncated scenes where whatever the main action was occurred and then the narrative just skipped straight to the next scene with practically no transition. The author didn’t waste any time describing how the characters got from place to place or what happened along the way. I don’t think I’d want a whole book to be paced like this, but for the climactic section, I was okay with it.
Eva: Although I thought the action-packed second half was done well, I was disappointed by the ending. It ended rather abruptly (in my opinion) and left some major things unanswered. I wonder if there might be a sequel…
I more enjoyed reading about Lolly’s everyday life in the first half of the book, where she is trying to balance being a normal middle schooler with becoming a siren. She comes to school late and is always tired and disorganized (because she was out late with her sisters causing shipwrecks). She hopes no one will notice the scales that are starting to grow on the bottoms of her feet or the way her hair is changing color. She wonders if her best friend Jason will still like her when he finds out that she’s really a monster. I thought this was so relatable for middle school kids who are going through their own changes at this age. (Turning into a teenager is sort of like becoming a mythical beast, right?)
Another thing I loved was Jason’s “evil” stepdad, Mr. Bergstrom. He was probably the most farcical character in the book, but I didn’t mind. His comedic obsession with his own Viking heritage and his creepy comments towards Jason’s mother made him very a specific bad guy.
Meagan: Yeah, he was an interesting and funny villain. I loved that there were actually two “bad guys” operating against each other, and really, the main character is a “bad guy” in her own right. Absolutely no one in the story is totally innocent or 100% good, but you still root for Lolly and want things to get better for her.
Eva: I agree. When I first heard about this story, I was skeptical. How could the protagonist be a siren? Aren’t sirens bad? But this book explores the gray areas. The sea witch and her sirens are protecting the ocean and its sealife from commercial fishers… but they are hurting people in the process. It’s an interesting take on an old myth.
Meagan: Speaking of old myths, I noticed that this book came out right around the same time as Neil Gaiman’s Norse Mythology. I haven’t had a chance to read that one yet, but apparently it’s flying off the shelves. Gaiman has a huge fan-base of both adult and kid readers, so maybe some kids who are newly hooked on mythology will find their way to Siren Sisters. I hope so!
THIS BOOK REMINDS US OF:
Meagan: This is an adult book, but it reminds me of The Buried Giant by Kazuo Ishiguro. Both books explore how historical wrongdoing can have a lasting impact on a community, and both books involve the use of magic to attempt to change those consequences.
Eva: It reminded me of an Alice Hoffman novel. Hoffman (author of Practical Magic and many others) often writes about quaint and quirky New England towns steeped in history, legend, and magic. She apparently writes middle grade and young adult novels as well, although I’ve only read her books for adults.
THIS BOOK IS A GREAT EXAMPLE OF:
- A specific setting
- Trusting the reader
- Keeping a complicated story to a reasonable length
- Fast pacing of a complicated story
- Great (and complex) villains
- A story that explores ethical gray areas
Eva: A magical and specific setting, two complex villains, and a relatable protagonist come together in this fast-paced yet richly-woven tale.
Meagan: I can imagine coming back to this book for writerly guidance on telling a complex story in the simplest and shortest possible way.